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Dang, I type too slow to get past the first paragraph

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Too long, too boring. The end doesn’t justify the means. 

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I didn't get a chance to finish the game due to its length and time needed to actually play it. From what I could play I really enjoyed, the content and story is outstanding. However, like others have stated a save function, or maybe a "super easy mode" would be a good idea so that average players can either pick up where they left off, or be able to get through the typing segments quicker. I've been at this for maybe 40 minutes and only just got to the swallowing scene, which feels like a pretty big chuck of time for e fetish game.

I'd like to come back to finish because I love your work, but setting aside the time needed to fully play this game may be difficult. It might be better for me to just wait fro a play-through video.

Either way, great job and as always I'm looking forward from more stuff from you! Thank you for the game!

I would say add more time for the written parts of take out the wrong letter time deduction system otherwise it seems good

Just a simple suggestion but could there be a save system since I started playing and I feel like it's gonna be long.

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So now what I can actually play the game:

Obviously, you've got to enjoy the content that the disclaimer warns of. Because it hits on it pretty great. 

Pros: Good story, an interesting art style, and now that the game is functional, it's not that hard and gives plenty of well spaced break opportunities. Despite the large amount of text, there was only two typos I saw in the entire game.

Cons: 1) There is a huge text to animation ratio. Obviously, that's the point of the game, but still. 

2) This is not a good font for a typing game. It's very difficult to tell certain CAPITALIZATIONS from lower case letters, such as o and O. Additionally, as many people have mentioned, the : was damn near invisible, even in full screen, on a large monitor.

3) When making a typing game, having casual writing (Gotta, gonna, RANDOM CAPITALIZED WORDS) really throws off the flow. 

Final thoughts; 6.5 out of 10. Good for one playthrough on easy mode, great story if you like the kinks, but ultimately this is just a really invested way to read a vore story.

So, if taking what everyone is saying: the game is too hard on its own and something in that typing thingy should be changed or removed (penalty for wrong letter or timer itself)

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Got to the last text block on browser and it was not accepting (1). Ngl, after dedicating over an hour to this game, it just really takes the wind out of my sails.

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It's the font, there's actually a colon : there that's really hard to see

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Man, this is just annoying, you have to be extremely good at typing to even get halfway through the second paragraph even on easy. this should just have a relax mode for people who want to actually even see the good content.

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Towards the end there are parenthesis "(1)" and for whatever reason I couldn't input them on linux. I don't know how much is left, but I would appreciate a way to skip forwards so that I don't have to replay everything in order to get back to where I was.

You likely couldn't see it, but before the (1) there's a : (c0lon) super tiny and hard to see in this game's font though!

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There's nothing fundamentally wrong with typing games, and while I'm not a speed typer, I'm definitely not slow by any means. And I can't get past the second passage. On the easiest difficulty. The punishment for a miss is far too harsh, the regen on a success is barely enough keep up with passive drain, and there's no indication of when you've hit/registered a spacebar. 

The difficulty needs to be toned way, way down if you want anyone other than courtroom stenographer's to get anywhere.

*On both Download and Web. I tried both. 

The speed is too fastt

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how to even play that?

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Whenever there’s text, you type in what’s displayed (similar to a WPM test). A lot of the functions are keyboard-based.

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I mean, how to even pass that? Even on the lowest difficulty it's impossible

I barely passed first thing, and come on, all over again if i fail in the next one? Are you kidding?

So… it looks like this was a bug in the HTML version (something with input handling). Fixed it just now, so it should be playable.

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No, i downloaded it first. And i meant text, if i pass first text here comes the second bigger one, and if i fail it i have to make again first one too. I literally didnt pass trought this text typing thing so i dont even know what is in the game further and only saw these screenshots on the page. And again, i set the lowest difficulty

Ooookay, I went ahead and inspected this more and found another bug in the Linux version. You’re right, the speed was way too fast on that version compared to the others (could be an OS thing). I updated the executables for both Windows and Linux as I did with Web. Now if you were running this on Windows, then I’m not really sure what the issue is. I tried playing the game on both my Windows machines and found no problems.

Also, with regards to having to start the page over again if you fail anywhere… that’s unfortunately the only functioning mechanic I was able to come up with in the short amount of time I had. Could be a good opportunity for an update in the future, though.

Anywho, I do overall apologize for the inconveniences. I’m trying real hard here to squander any playability issues that I missed before submissions ended (again, I only exported what I had while the jam was still active).

Hope you understand.